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Artist's Comments

Midtown train 6944 passes by on Track 2 bound for New York Penn Station.

This print was sold at the Jajo Galleries "One City" Show in March of 2009.

Critiques


:icondragonslayero:
Now here we have what I would go to the extent of calling a masterpiece!
Being that I am propably at the other side of scale of occupation (being that I work with aircraft) and that I live in a country that considers unproductive agriculture over masstransportation I rarely see any good train scenes. So needless to say I might even call this photo mindblowing.

The natural focus for me is instantly that wonderful motion blur of the passing train. Just the simple task of using it in these dark conditions really makes it stand out from all other photos I saw on the critiquable list.
There is one feature that I really admire in well thought through nighttime photos... the unflooded and relatively cold light approach. Normally it seems that every gorvernment out there hates photographers, always choosingorange and yellow tinted bulbs for streetlights and so on. As I focus on that part it still seems that some photographers have overcome the problem... needless to say, you are one of them.
I am not going into that subject more than this simply because I'm struggling with that subject myself.

Lastly I would like to point out the excellent use of the slightly illuminated rails.
Ok, they are just lying there... but this is what makes them perfect, perfect for making something for the viewer to fix to and guide him from the left corner of the photo and into the perfectly exposed train that is just stnading there.

Very well thought through photo.
Just an honest opinion.

OJJ
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:iconcha5ney:
Gonna have to swear... Fucking awesome shot buddy!
:iconlar-dog:
That is worth making a print. Such colors and the exposure is amassing.

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Peace is a lie, there is only passion. Through passion, I gain strength. Through strength, I gain power. Through power, I gain victory. Through victory, my chains are broken. The Force shall free me.

- The Code of the Sith
:icontaylorsaville:
Oh yes. Looks awesome. What an excellent photo. I love this! When I saw the thumbnail it really caught my attention, and now that I see it fullview it really looks incredible. Wonderful job, Sullivan. :heart: :rose: :heart:

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"A work of art is the trace of a magnificent struggle." -Robert Henri
:iconewhyes:
Imagine if we could travel back and fro from the past or future.

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Interesting people are people who are interested.
:iconfeni0x:
Nice capture bro +fav

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you cant move a cow unless you say "MOOve it

Make what you feel when it comes to art, not just to make art but to express feeling-~giyvin
Formaly~martango
:iconsullivan1985:
Thank you.

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-Sully

Photography pho · tog · ra · phy - (n): The art of trial & error.
:iconaconitum-napellus:
Beautiful shot :-)

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Wyrd bið ful aræd - The Wanderer
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:iconsullivan1985:
Thank you for the comment and all the +fav's!

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-Sully

Photography pho · tog · ra · phy - (n): The art of trial & error.
:iconaconitum-napellus:
You're welcome :D I haven't finished yet ;-) You're bringing back great memories of visiting my sister in Jersey City - I loved travelling on the trains there :D

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Wyrd bið ful aræd - The Wanderer
My gallery [link]
My lovely Spock-based Star Trek fiction [link]
dA is for the literary arts, too. :-)

Details

October 6, 2008
2.8 MB
229 KB
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KONICA MINOLTA
MAXXUM 7D
15/1 second
F/9.5
45 mm
400
Oct 5, 2008, 11:08:46 PM

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