I love the rain on the umbrella, also, the goosebumps/goosepimples on the back are great, (or is it noise? what was the iso?) makes her appear vulnerable, ie something has shivered her.
DoF is a bit off for me in this one, the top right of the umbrella is in line with the focus of the face, but the umbrella fans out towards the camera and goes soft. So the face is sharp, edge of umbrella is soft, center of umbrella is sharp. Breaks the photo up, but not in a good way.
The lighting is good, i love the wrinkles on the sleeve of her jumper, the shadows look great.
Maybe photoshop out the bright pink metal piece on her bra. bit distracting.
Composition is nice, the angle of her face and the edge of the umbrella match up nicely.
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DoF is a bit off for me in this one, the top right of the umbrella is in line with the focus of the face, but the umbrella fans out towards the camera and goes soft. So the face is sharp, edge of umbrella is soft, center of umbrella is sharp. Breaks the photo up, but not in a good way.
The lighting is good, i love the wrinkles on the sleeve of her jumper, the shadows look great.
Maybe photoshop out the bright pink metal piece on her bra. bit distracting.
Composition is nice, the angle of her face and the edge of the umbrella match up nicely.
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-Sully
Photography pho · tog · ra · phy - (n): The art of trial & error.
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