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Relax On The Bench by =sullivan1985:iconsullivan1985:

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*BobRock99 May 14, 2009, 8:46:15 AM
I did not see it before .. now when I read Bill critique I see beautiful image ... Her face expression is like a beautiful easy melody, I like colors and deep of fields .. Here composition (rhythm) is little problematic for my amateurish opinion . because my english is bad I made a my view of composition [link] ... I know that framing is a meter of taste, but personally I don't like same color on border frame like basic image ... maybe darker or lighter ... nice title by the way ... Am I close to the 100 words? yes I am :) that's it ...the end
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=ErnestHildred May 14, 2009, 12:34:14 AM
Sometimes shots like this can seem forced, unnatural.
Now, while this may have indeed been posed? Her smile and her positioning on the bench make it for me.
The circle of the arm rest frames that beautiful face. Though her beauty alone may do that also!
Wonderful light, soft colors ( brown looks great on her ).
The focus is excellent. Decent background.
I can't say I like the frame that much, but I only mention to fill out the hundred words needed for this! :)
Her face? That smile? They make the shot. Thanks for bringing it to us!
Three more words?? Umm, OK....more! more! more!
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~katiezgreatie Feb 17, 2008, 4:36:05 PM
I like the perspective with the benches and all. :)

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~the-swede Feb 17, 2008, 5:34:44 PM
Nice! Perfect contrast. Not too flat and not too harsh. Details preserved in the shadows and the highlights!
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=sullivan1985 Feb 17, 2008, 6:50:18 PM
Thanks man! I shot a few more from here but they just didn't work the way this one did.

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Mood: Joy *shawn529 Feb 17, 2008, 7:34:39 PM
nice composition and depth of field

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~viciousG42 Feb 17, 2008, 7:50:35 PM
i can digg it. love the brown with the light blue/turquoise in the background.
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=sullivan1985 Feb 17, 2008, 11:10:59 PM
Thank you. She certainly is!

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-Sully

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=sullivan1985 Feb 17, 2008, 11:11:06 PM
Thanks bro.

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Photography pho · tog · ra · phy - (n): The art of trial & error.
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=sullivan1985 Feb 17, 2008, 11:11:12 PM
Thank you!

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February 17, 2008
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135 KB
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KONICA MINOLTA
MAXXUM 7D
1/125 second
F/8.0
300 mm
200
Feb 17, 2008, 1:34:07 PM

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