Relax On The Bench

I did not see it before .. now when I read Bill critique I see beautiful image ... Her face expression is like a beautiful easy melody, I like colors and deep of fields .. Here composition (rhythm) is little problematic for my amateurish opinion . because my english is bad I made a my view of composition [link] ... I know that framing is a meter of taste, but personally I don't like same color on border frame like basic image ... maybe darker or lighter ... nice title by the way ... Am I close to the 100 words? yes I am <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" /> that's it ...the end